Writing a Letter of Continued Interest: A Second Chance

Getting a college rejection letter in the mail or email can be so discouraging. Especially if it was from one of your dream schools. But there’s actually a way for you to get a second chance at acceptance if you were waitlisted or deferred. It’s called writing a letter of continued interest (LOCI). 

Never heard of it? Most students haven’t!

But a well-written letter of continued interest shows your determination, commitment, and passion for the institution.

Keep reading to learn more about the process of writing an effective LOCI. One that could tip the scales in your favor and turn rejection into an acceptance.

What is a letter of continued interest?

A LOCI is an email that you send to the admissions committee to express your enthusiasm at attending their school after having your acceptance waitlisted or deferred. It’s also sometimes called a letter of enthusiasm. It’s pretty much your final chance at persuading the admissions team of a particular school that they should accept you.

You will want to read your initial waitlist/rejection letter carefully to see if the institution already outlines specific actions for you to take.

How to Write a Letter of Continued Interest

If you are planning on writing a LOCI, follow the steps below to ensure that your messaging is clear and professional. Writing a bad LOCI could have the opposite effect you intend.

Acknowledge Your Disappointment Gracefully

Start your letter of continued interest by politely acknowledging your rejection. Thank the admissions committee for considering your application and express your understanding of the highly selective nature of the college. 

By doing this, you will demonstrate your maturity and professionalism. This will set the tone for the rest of your letter.

Example Phrasing: 

Dear [Name of Institution] Admissions Committee,

I am writing in response to the recent rejection letter I received from your institution. I know that the admissions process is highly selective these days, and I can only imagine how many applications you have received already this year.

Restate Your Passion for the College

Next, restate your genuine interest in the specific college. Explain why this institution remains your top choice for college despite the initial setback. 

Highlight specific aspects of the college that resonate with you. This could include its unique programs, faculty, campus culture, or extracurricular opportunities. Share stories or personal experiences that reaffirm your alignment with the college’s values and mission.

Example Phrasing: 

I am following up with you because while I didn’t get accepted into your [college/university], I am still very much interested in [state specifically what aspect of the institution interests you].

Showcase Your Accomplishments and Growth

Use the LOCI as an opportunity to showcase your recent accomplishments and growth. Update the admissions committee on any notable achievements, awards, internships, or community involvement that occurred since submitting your original application. 

State clearly how these experiences have contributed to your personal development and further fueled your desire to attend their college.

Example Phrasing: 

Since submitting my initial application back in [state when original application was submitted], I have [state what additional activities/accomplishments you have taken on].

Address Academic Improvements

This may apply if there were any weaknesses in your original application, such as lower grades or test scores. Explain how you have taken steps to address them. 

Share your efforts to improve academically and mention any notable achievements or progress in your studies. Demonstrating a commitment to self-improvement reflects your resilience and determination. 

Example Phrasing: 

You may have noticed in my original application that [state what may have looked bad on original application], I have [state what specific improvements you made].

Express Your Fit and Contributions

Restate how your unique skills, experiences, and perspective can benefit the college’s community. Discuss how you plan to contribute positively to campus life, whether through clubs, organizations, volunteering, or academic pursuits. 

Admissions committees seek students who will not only thrive academically but also enhance the campus environment. Be as specific as possible in these examples.

Example Phrasing: 

I truly believe that my [state your specific valuable skills/perspective/experience] would be a great asset to your institution. [Go into more detail].

Conclude by Asking for their Reconsideration

Make sure that you end the letter by specifically requesting that they reconsider your chance of acceptance. Don’t be vague or hint at the idea. Politely state that you wish for them to reopen your application an take a second look.

Example Phrasing: 

As [Name of Institution] is my top choice, I would be incredibly appreciative if you would reconsider my application in light of these additional details. Of course, I understand if this is not possible. However, any dream is worth fighting for. 

I thank you for taking the time to read my letter. 

Sincerely, 

[Your Name]

What to Avoid in Your Letter

Now you have an idea of the key parts of an effective letter of continued interest. But there are some common mistakes that you should avoid at all costs. If you commit any of the mistakes below, you are better off skipping the LOCI altogether!

Avoid Begging or Desperation

In your letter of continued interest, you definitely want to convey your enthusiasm. But avoid sounding desperate or pleading. 

Instead, focus on presenting your strengths and why you believe the college is an ideal fit for you (and vice versa). Be sincere and passionate, but maintain a dignified tone throughout the letter.

Avoid Generalizations

Make sure that you tailor this letter specifically for the college you are writing it for. Writing a LOCI takes a different approach from writing your personal statement.

You can typically use the same personal statement to apply to multiple different schools. (Unless your school requires its own specific personal essay). But a LOCI must be written directly to just the one school to whom it is addressed. That means within the letter you want to include specific details about just that school. This will make it clear that you only have eyes for them, so to speak.

Avoid Being Too Wordy

Letters of continued interest should be to-the-point. Be clear and specific and try to keep the email under 300 words. Writing a super lengthy letter may be a turn-off to the admissions committee. And it will also make your messaging lose its power. So stick to just your key points.

Final Thoughts on Writing a Letter of Continued Interest

• Writing a letter of continued interest can be a powerful tool for demonstrating your dedication and enthusiasm for your dream college. 
• Approach the task with sincerity, humility, and a positive attitude. 
• Remember that even if the college ultimately does not change their decision, the process of writing the LOCI allows you to reflect on your goals, accomplishments, and aspirations. 
• Regardless of the outcome, you can be proud of your efforts and the resilience you have shown in the face of adversity. 
• Best of luck in your college admission journey!